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January 15
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:icondarkmanethewerewolf:
Despite being a grumpy old fart, Cornelius' uncle isn't so cruel as to leave Cornelius to wollow in despair. =p But will his attempt to cheer Cornelius up work???

Typos? Mistakes? You know what to do.

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Fixed some Typos thanks to ~The-Stalkeh-Kitteh and ~CheeseCakePhantom

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:iconlouisetheanimator:
*Louisetheanimator Feb 15, 2013  Student Filmographer
Was this done in Photoshop?
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:icondarkmanethewerewolf:
*DarkmaneTheWerewolf Feb 19, 2013  Professional General Artist
Nope, still using GIMP as i am more familiar with it.
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*Louisetheanimator Feb 19, 2013  Student Filmographer
Ok.
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*Kazul2112 Jan 27, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I am enjoying this comic. The expressions, dialog, and their general personalities of these two is entertaining.
:wave:
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:icondarkmanethewerewolf:
*DarkmaneTheWerewolf Jan 27, 2013  Professional General Artist
Thanks =p I'm glad you're enjoying it so far, it means i've done at least something right i hope XD
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~CheeseCakePhantom Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
There is a typo in the second to last speech bubble.

It should be 'its' and not 'it's' since 'it's' is a shortened term of 'it is'.

Great job as always! :D
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:icondarkmanethewerewolf:
*DarkmaneTheWerewolf Jan 16, 2013  Professional General Artist
Ah, I always get the Its and It's mixed up >< Thanks a lot for pointing htat out XD I'll get that fixed at some point =p
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~The-Stalkeh-Kitteh Jan 15, 2013
Aww. That's sweet.

In the second bubble, using 'also' and 'too' in the same sentence is kinda awkward. I suggest getting rid of one of them; doesn't matter which.
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*DarkmaneTheWerewolf Jan 16, 2013  Professional General Artist
I knew you'd come to my rescue XD Indeed, now that i read through it again, it does sound pretty awkward >< I'd written the basics in rough then tried to fill up the space when i neatenned it DX

Thanks again =p
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~The-Stalkeh-Kitteh Jan 16, 2013
Am I your unofficial grammar-checker now? Lol.
Anyway, it's fine; nice to have an outlet for my inner grammar Nazi.
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