Deviant Login Shop  Join deviantART for FREE Take the Tour
×



Details

Submitted on
January 15, 2013
Image Size
1.5 MB
Resolution
1132×1600
Link
Thumb
Embed

Stats

Views
1,591
Favourites
17 (who?)
Comments
14
Downloads
4
×
Story of Cornelius - Chapter 1: Page 09 by DarkmaneTheWerewolf Story of Cornelius - Chapter 1: Page 09 by DarkmaneTheWerewolf
Despite being a grumpy old fart, Cornelius' uncle isn't so cruel as to leave Cornelius to wollow in despair. =p But will his attempt to cheer Cornelius up work???

Typos? Mistakes? You know what to do.

[Start from the beginning] [Previous Page] [Next Page]

Updates/changes:
Fixed some Typos thanks to ~The-Stalkeh-Kitteh and ~CheeseCakePhantom

Directory: [link]
Add a Comment:
 

The Artist has requested Critique on this Artwork

Please sign up or login to post a critique.

:iconsilverzeo:
SilverZeo Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2013  Hobbyist
Trust a face that can smile like that?
Reply
:iconlouisetheanimator:
Louisetheanimator Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2013  Student Filmographer
Was this done in Photoshop?
Reply
:icondarkmanethewerewolf:
DarkmaneTheWerewolf Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Professional General Artist
Nope, still using GIMP as i am more familiar with it.
Reply
:iconlouisetheanimator:
Louisetheanimator Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Student Filmographer
Ok.
Reply
:iconkazul2112:
Kazul2112 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I am enjoying this comic. The expressions, dialog, and their general personalities of these two is entertaining.
:wave:
Reply
:icondarkmanethewerewolf:
DarkmaneTheWerewolf Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Professional General Artist
Thanks =p I'm glad you're enjoying it so far, it means i've done at least something right i hope XD
Reply
:iconcheesecakephantom:
CheeseCakePhantom Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
There is a typo in the second to last speech bubble.

It should be 'its' and not 'it's' since 'it's' is a shortened term of 'it is'.

Great job as always! :D
Reply
:icondarkmanethewerewolf:
DarkmaneTheWerewolf Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Professional General Artist
Ah, I always get the Its and It's mixed up >< Thanks a lot for pointing htat out XD I'll get that fixed at some point =p
Reply
:iconthe-stalkeh-kitteh:
The-Stalkeh-Kitteh Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013
Aww. That's sweet.

In the second bubble, using 'also' and 'too' in the same sentence is kinda awkward. I suggest getting rid of one of them; doesn't matter which.
Reply
:icondarkmanethewerewolf:
DarkmaneTheWerewolf Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Professional General Artist
I knew you'd come to my rescue XD Indeed, now that i read through it again, it does sound pretty awkward >< I'd written the basics in rough then tried to fill up the space when i neatenned it DX

Thanks again =p
Reply
Add a Comment: